Don-Jackimo's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Neenja: Way Of The Harut]

Excellent

Awesome skills man! Your animation style is wicked. It's heaps fluent, I can see you put a lot of thought into movement and expression. The character style is great, and I love the plot. My only criticism is I wish there was more!

[Bear Strategies]

Classic!

Thought it was awesome, especially the hippo joke. Nice style of art, tolerable animation, very entertaining. Would like to see more.

[Zealant Tales-Music4tale]

Needs improvement.

I gave you a low score not because I think this was bad but because I think there is a great deal of it that could have been better. The animation needed a great amount of improvement. This is a lot more work I understand but I felt that the animation was so simple that the characters became like robots or just flat cardboard cut outs. They felt lifeless. I liked it when you gave the girl some secondary animation on the hair and on the foxes hair, this would have improved the other characters if you had given them something like that. A lot of the tweens could be improved if you jacked the frame rate up to 24's making them look smoother. Your backgrounds could be improved if you used 1 point and 2 point perspective which would give them depth. I think shading could have helped the art style a great deal plus if you made the lines less rigid by giving them varying widths and more organic shapes. I think the story needed some more development, it all happened very fast and some of it was hard to understand. Overall it was a good piece of student work and I think it has potential so keep at it.

[Two Strange]

Well done

Pretty good 4 a stop mo. A couple of minor camera bumps and lighting changes. I have mates who do stop motion so I can appreciate how easily that can happen. Overall nice animation but still needs a polish.

[Madie's Birthday Wish]

cute

Made me laugh, was a bit worried to begin with.

[Magic School Bus: Grade 5]

It was ok

Thought the concept was good, not as impressed with the final product. Animation definitely needs improvement.

[Machete Overkill]

Motorbikes are cool!

Why is it that the illiterates always rate things with a 4? Sweet and short, I liked it.