This was sick! I disagree with the comment below though. I think if you coloured this it would look fucking awesome. Even if you just coloured the first part and left the dream sequence black and white it would be cool. Also I think you could redo some of the backgrounds in the first part. They looked a bit pixely and average compared to the rest. Some awesome animation in this, some looked a bit rushed but I understand you had a tight deadline and most of it looked pretty good. All in all I think you could go over this and polish it up and it would be amazing, you could enter it in short film comps and put a lot of animation companies to shame. Good work.