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This was sick! I disagree with the comment below though. I think if you coloured this it would look fucking awesome. Even if you just coloured the first part and left the dream sequence black and white it would be cool. Also I think you could redo some of the backgrounds in the first part. They looked a bit pixely and average compared to the rest. Some awesome animation in this, some looked a bit rushed but I understand you had a tight deadline and most of it looked pretty good. All in all I think you could go over this and polish it up and it would be amazing, you could enter it in short film comps and put a lot of animation companies to shame. Good work.

Rickdiculous responds:

Thank you for your review. In all honestly, the MAIN two reasons why I decided to do this in black and white is 1. Coloring would be time consuming as hell for me, because 2. My sight suffers from Color Deficiency. I am TERRIBLE at coloring, because I am Red-Green Color Blind. I've always loved to draw, but I have never (and never will) been able to manipulate color. And yes, I am definitely going to revisit some of the rushed shots here in the next few weeks and re upload a REDUX. Again, thank you!

This started out f*ing awesome! The joke was kinda average though. Praise the sun joke was funny but it was a bit too little too late. Some of it was so nicely done my eyes nearly had an orgasm but then I was rudely interrupted by some pretty average animation and some average looking lighting on those characters. That guy should have kept his helmet on and I'm not quite sure what was going on with that nerdy guy, his jowls didn't quite move with his mouth. Sorry to be so harsh but this had seriously some of the best backgrounds I've seen in a while on Newgrounds but the rest didn't do it justice. Definitely could have done with a little bit more polish on the animation and a better script.

You have awesome style man!

Quality stop mo! Your writing is getting better. Very Monty Pythonesque!

Love your stuff man! My only suggestion would be change the face of Robot a little bit because he kinda looks like Bemo from Adventure Time (not saying you ripped him off, just saying they look similar)

Thant was f-ing awesome! Heaps nice backgrounds. Loving the sureal style. The animation was great, kinda reminded me of Aeon Flux. Nice job!

codywalzel responds:

I do like that Aeon Flux, a favorable comparison, thanks for watching!

The score was awesome! The animation was brilliant as well. You have some good skills there, I'm surprised you're still stuck in construction with skills like that!

Pretty good! I reckon you could check the levels of the sound, I couldn't understand what the dude said at the end at all. Also I think you should render this out as a h264 file or something? It looks like you've done it as an avi with a cinepac codec or something? It's heaps pixelly which takes away from your awesome art!

Wow! That was some incredible animation. That would have taken ages!

I don't know what all the fuss is about, Ren and Stimpy was disgusting and that was an awesome cartoon. I've checked out a few of your other cartoons and they're great! The style is a little inconsistent and some of the humor is just generally random but all in all I think this was pretty damn good!

YULFO83 responds:

Thanks Dude! Alot of people were angry at this one for some reason, not sure why. ha. I try to have something different all the time so that if you don't like one you'll like the other. thanks for the rating!

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