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Don-Jackimo

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Excellent

Awesome skills man! Your animation style is wicked. It's heaps fluent, I can see you put a lot of thought into movement and expression. The character style is great, and I love the plot. My only criticism is I wish there was more!

Pretty good

It was good but I didn't get many of the jokes. But maybe that's just me. There was a couple of things that I found funny though. Also felt like it didn't go anywhere in terms of plot. Overall I still enjoyed watching it.

Tripped out

That was freakin' awesome art style and animation. Some of the concepts were pretty cool. I felt like it wasn't as awesome in the plot section. It all felt like it was just an excuse to draw some freaky creatures and animate them which I don't have a problem with but I feel it would have improved this piece if it had more substance.

Classic!

Thought it was awesome, especially the hippo joke. Nice style of art, tolerable animation, very entertaining. Would like to see more.

Needs improvement.

I gave you a low score not because I think this was bad but because I think there is a great deal of it that could have been better. The animation needed a great amount of improvement. This is a lot more work I understand but I felt that the animation was so simple that the characters became like robots or just flat cardboard cut outs. They felt lifeless. I liked it when you gave the girl some secondary animation on the hair and on the foxes hair, this would have improved the other characters if you had given them something like that. A lot of the tweens could be improved if you jacked the frame rate up to 24's making them look smoother. Your backgrounds could be improved if you used 1 point and 2 point perspective which would give them depth. I think shading could have helped the art style a great deal plus if you made the lines less rigid by giving them varying widths and more organic shapes. I think the story needed some more development, it all happened very fast and some of it was hard to understand. Overall it was a good piece of student work and I think it has potential so keep at it.

Pretty good, but...

You should have more info about yourself at the start and end of a reel. You may have edited it out for newgrounds which is probably a good idea. Also a good idea to only have your best stuff, it doesn't look very professional if you submit old files that you might love but aren't necessarily your best works. Some of your stuff looked great, other stuff looked very amateur. Some of the art was really good.

Well done

Pretty good 4 a stop mo. A couple of minor camera bumps and lighting changes. I have mates who do stop motion so I can appreciate how easily that can happen. Overall nice animation but still needs a polish.

cute

Made me laugh, was a bit worried to begin with.

It was ok

Thought the concept was good, not as impressed with the final product. Animation definitely needs improvement.

Motorbikes are cool!

Why is it that the illiterates always rate things with a 4? Sweet and short, I liked it.

Age 35, Male

South Australia

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